Rabu, 17 Februari 2021

Writing for IELTS Exercise 2.0 - Global English - Kampung Inggris Pare


Some people believe that smartphones are destroying social interaction today


    The development of smartphones is getting more and more advanced significantly. By the existence of smartphones, it helps people to interact and also socialize with other people. Therefore, I believe that there is no disruptive social interaction as it has different meaning in today’s society.

    Plenty of inventions are found recently concerning features and applications in the interest of enhancing communication activity. They ease us since we don't need to go out of our house and just sit in our coach enjoying our leisure time. Those things are provided by smartphones and we can use them as a substitute for traditional interaction which oblige us to do face-to-face meetings and so on. It needs a longer time if we compare it to online interaction through smartphones one of well-known applications that enhance interaction is instagram. It provides lots of features which support more interaction such as commenting on others' pictures, chatting through direct messages, replying to their stories, and we can even make a video call.


    in contrast, many children are using smartphones when they do not have enough age yet. Moreover, they prefer to play games that have less interaction with other people, it makes them more apathetic and individualistic as well. The prevention of this situation is giving guidance from their parents, such as giving limited time when using smartphones, giving advice about how to use it wisely, giving punishment if their children violate the rules which are made by their parents.


    Smartphones make people closer by interaction with each other. The involvement of parents is needed to prevent misusing smartphones by children

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